Hi bloggers!
This week I was learning about Sophie Pascoe. She is a swimmer. And she has fake leg.
She have 9 gold medals and 6 Silver medals. I liked writing facts about her.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Miss Bunting, Mrs Lee and Miss Ferguson. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, they will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi bloggers!
This week I was learning about Sophie Pascoe. She is a swimmer. And she has fake leg.
She have 9 gold medals and 6 Silver medals. I liked writing facts about her.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hey Seoa it's me Ofa, I like how you did not forget to add the description on your blog post. I also like that you added a picture of Sophie Pasco on your poster, but i mostly liked how you putted Sophie Pasco's gold medals and silver medals on your google drawing. but next time put the WALT.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work.
Hi Seoa
ReplyDeleteI really love your work on Sophie Pascoe. I love that you have added how she became a Paralympic, it gives the reader an insight in the struggles she has had in her life. I also love the pictures you have added, I can see straight away how many medals she has and it looks so impressive. She is such a great inspiration to everybody. Great work Seoa.
Hi Seoa
ReplyDeleteI love the facts you have shared about Sophie. I am blown away by the number of events she is competing in. Are you going to get to watch some of her events at the para olympics in the next few days?